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Night fall
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Night fall |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
As the sun surrenders to the horizon to sleep Giving over to darkness the land to keep Creeping stillness the land does embrace A silent dance of elegant extraordinary grace Invading every crevice with its sense of calm Every sense embraced in its cold unseen palm Bringing with it a reluctant yield Over all creatures who cling to the shield Of warmth and happiness brought on by the sun Dark and blank over the land does it run Smothering all with its stifling cloak Laughing silently at their pettiness like a joke 'til sunrise where night clings to the land in vain Relieving it of its watch over its domain Does the sun open its sleepy glowing eye And silently rises to wish the night goodbye |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
More of my poetry is under the alias of Decriel on page 4 i think it is, i would reall appreciate comments on them. As i dont want to resubmit them but i would like opinions so i may better my work |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
very kool discription love the poem. |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
Why would you want to better your work? it's so wonderful!!!! I'm new but it's amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! Midnightdreamer |
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