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Broken_Inside
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since 2007-05-06
Posts 4
Texas

0 posted 2007-06-10 08:49 PM


I haven't really done this before so if I suck I'm sorry!

Crying out your name
But you can't even hear
You are breaking my heart
And thats my biggest fear

Why do you hurt me?
Do you like to see me in pain?
I thought we were meant to be,
I'll never quit crying your name

How could you do this to me?
You hurt me deep inside
I was always there for you
I wiped your tears when you cried

I guess you'll never see
How hurt I truly am
I can't believe I fell for you
You'll never know what your putting me through

So I guess this is goodbye
I'll never see you again
You'll never see these tears I cry
Or know the pain you put me in!

By: Alliey R.
I don't know how many girls get their heart broken becuz of a guy! But I do know there are alot out there, and I'm one of them! I'm just trying to stay strong!

© Copyright 2007 Alliey Rosser - All Rights Reserved
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-06-11 03:56 PM


I liked it nice work.

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

blue face
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 92

2 posted 2007-06-11 06:03 PM


wow Ilove this poem
I can seriously relate
nice job


ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
3 posted 2007-06-12 04:48 PM


Our tears of pain are very rarely understood.  Can relate to your work.  Keep writing.
princesa carmen13
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since 2007-06-13
Posts 1

4 posted 2007-06-13 01:35 AM


nice i liked it stay strong i know ur pain too...
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