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ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA

0 posted 2007-06-07 10:42 AM


Seems so unfair,
I didn't ask to be born.

And all you have,
is one hour for me.

Can you understand,
that I Love and Hate.

For even that one hour,
my heart will ache.

I do not understand,
do you not see.

That in that one hour,
once again you walk on me.

You remind me of just how little,
I really mean to you.

© Copyright 2007 Lisa A Joost - All Rights Reserved
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-06-07 10:55 AM


I loved this poem! it was very touching

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
2 posted 2007-06-07 11:11 AM


Thank you, it has been long in coming.
rockbabe
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 105

3 posted 2007-06-07 04:47 PM


Nice one...hope to see more.

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