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darkblues
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since 2007-02-20
Posts 27


0 posted 2007-06-05 05:17 PM


The mist lifts off
hills and distant peaks
the sun shines brighter
it glistens afar it seeks
forgotten hedgerows
long lost meadows
rivers and lakes
gorges and creatures
the trees grow taller
rolling hills look greener
the rain falls short
a rainbow forms
it tilts out of the glowing sky
ribbons of coloured lights
a magnetic aura
penetrates the senses
beautiful feelings float
spiral up the spine
hairs on neck spike
feels marvelous
massive grin and breath in
the air the world
it’s free and it’s generous
breath out eyes open
light fades shadows murmur
wounded eyes narrow
cold and lonely
dark, black, dense, blocky it’s bleak
no clean no pristine no green
intoxicated by stenches
sharp uncertainties
bottled up paranoia
I’m a solitary creature
living in urbanoia
just got caught up
in a moments euphoria.

Prismatic changes
facade the light
darkness blinds
all wishes descend
in to creatures
faraway murmurs.


[This message has been edited by darkblues (06-05-2007 06:01 PM).]

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RogueandPoet
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since 2007-06-04
Posts 126
Oregon
1 posted 2007-06-06 10:01 AM


I think you need to get out of the city more often. Nice work....
carolinabeen
Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 69

2 posted 2007-06-08 04:38 AM


Damn, I mean thank you!!!! I have a real sense that poetry lives and not only in one, or for one, because of one, just that it lives.
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