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tearsofpain
Junior Member

since 2007-05-03

Posts 38

0 posted 2007-05-20 09:51 PM

COULD IT BE
BECAUSE THE WORLD DOESN’T UNDERSTAND ME
WITH EVERY BREATH I TAKE AND EVERY MOVE I MAKE I WONDER
WAS GIVING ME LIFE SUCH A MISTAKE
I STRUGGLE WITHIN DIRTY AND SOILED WITH SIN
WILL I MAKE IT TO MY TRUE TIME
OR WILL LIFE MAKE A FOOL OF ME AND PROVE I AM NOTHING BUT GRIME
HOLD ME TAKE ME LET ME GO
YOUR NOT STRONG BECAUSE OF WHAT YOU DON’T KNOW
I FIGHT INSIDE I SCREAM IN MY MIND
CALM AND COLLECTIVE I MAY SEEM
PAIN AND HURT IS MY LIFE’S THEME
A HUG OR HEART TO SHOW OF LOVE
AS I BEG AND PLEAD WITH THE MAN ABOVE
LET ME BE NORMAL LET ME LIVE THE LIFE YOU GAVE
WHY CANT TODAY BE MY LIFE YOU SAVE
SHOULD I LAY IN THE COLD TRENCHES OF WHAT I CALL A DAY
OR SHOULD I STAND UP AND SAY……
THE AIR I BREATH IS IT WORTH ME
THE LIFE I LIVE WILL MAKE ME HAPPY

lovergurl
Member

since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

1 posted 2007-05-23 12:17 PM

awwwww. i loved it! keep 'em coming.

Becca.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-05-24 02:02 AM

LET ME BE NORMAL LET ME LIVE THE LIFE YOU GAVE
WHY CANT TODAY BE MY LIFE YOU SAVE~

really liked that part. Hell I loved it all great write. I can understand where you are coming from in this poem. hope to read more soon.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

3 posted 2007-05-26 12:34 PM

HUG!! and lots of them
wow i liked and i hope that life can et better. i really know where your coming from.

Hug!

Abbeon

blue face
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

4 posted 2007-06-11 06:11 PM

I liked the rythm of it
pretty good.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

5 posted 2007-06-11 06:39 PM

Awww!! i can so relate to that! this is a wonderful write! hope to see more soon

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

trUstNooNe
Member

since 2006-05-21

Posts 91

6 posted 2007-06-11 09:48 PM

Deep...It touched me. very nice i can't wait to read more

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

7 posted 2007-06-12 04:46 PM

Wonderfully put feelings. I have often felt this way myself. Really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

tearsofpain
Junior Member

since 2007-05-03

Posts 38

8 posted 2007-06-14 04:08 PM

thank u everyone for reading i hope i dont become too much of a downer around here lol-christy

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