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heartbroken. |
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lovergurl Member
since 2007-05-08
Posts 59va |
Some days I can keep away the tears, Some days I just wanna lay in bed and forget the world, Some days everything is worse, and I just get more and more fears. Some days I'm perfectly fine, Some days it feels like the walls are closing in on me, Some days I just want you to be mine. Some days I hate you, Some days I explain how much I love you, Some days I try to froget the bad things you do. Some days I try to go out and find me a better guy, Some days I get overwelmed 'cause I think I'm getting over you, Then I just realize it was all a lie. I guess I'm at the part where I'm starting to get over you, My friends say it's going to be a tough ride, I just say if they can do it,I can do it too. But, there's always that day when I think I just won't get by, Then the next,I feel like a new person. It lasts only for a while.. then just turns out it was once again a lie. I'm tired of doing this same routine, Where's that day when I'll never look back, Where's that day when I won't miss you, My chest won't hurt from ache, My nose won't burn from holding back tears, And I'll actually want to get out of the bed? Becca. |
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stormdancer Junior Member
since 2007-05-10
Posts 31state of confustion |
Too true. This is good, though. That last line you may want to turn into a few more, as it's a bit long. Maybe break it up at the commas. |
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lovergurl Member
since 2007-05-08
Posts 59va |
thankies! Becca. |
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