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darkblues
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since 2007-02-20
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0 posted 2007-05-10 04:11 PM


Some visit this complex
Like they own it
They state it
And rate it as

Desolate place to be
Vast wilderness

For some believe it as
A mere concept, infinity

The price paid
By human
Do not want to see

In limbo you
Appear to be free
In the mix with friends and family

Yet
Everything seems invisible
Everything else
Those images you see  
Apparitions,

Fluxes
Of this world.

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-05-15 11:28 PM


Yet
Everything seems invisible
Everything else
Those images you see  
Apparitions,

really liked this part...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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