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20 Bensons and a Clipper
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20 Bensons and a Clipper |
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darkblues Junior Member
since 2007-02-20
Posts 27 |
Reach for smokes empty sprint to the garage this is an emergency look at the lady note her kind eyes twenty Bensons and a Clipper please bensons sir- outstanding ducks behind the counter leaves me looking longingly at a pristine yellow lighter this what you had in mind she says seductively eyes light up well um that yellow one looks very… she stands up and points a gun at me eyes look at me mentally I look at the gun intensely ducking immediately reach for my Egg card and chuck it in her general direction shouting pin numbers 6284 honestly I curl up in a ball Christ don’t hurt me. Back on the sofa watching Crime stoppers UK smoking with a large Brandy trying to get the roses back in my cheeks thank goodness his wig cam off when it did saw it through the gaps in my fingers - about to do myself a mischief I hate Dom Joly especially in drag look up at the ceiling and tut thinking about stitched up kippers and good actors I strike a match and flick it in to the ashtray. |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
I really enjoyed your poem. I was there when I read it. |
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chunkstar666 New Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 5 |
Probably one of the best poems I have read till now here...like the flow and how u write as things are and not try to structure it like a traditional poem....and ur observation is truly pristine should I say...very enjoyable |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
As soon as I read the title I knew it was from the UK. 20 B&H. Miss the old country. Top poem, I liked it alot. |
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