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mged
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0 posted 2007-04-26 10:24 AM



Lost in a storm
gone from the land
upheld in darkness
lost is my hart
gone from my mind
the angels fall
love left, gone from me
will i every find another
to share a love of friends
my friend you are gone
the light that lit my way
so shortly we knew each other


will i find another
yes may i
no i wont
gone is my mind
lost is a love
found once more
this is hard
to do to move on
long ago you left
but the pain still stays
will i get over it or will
i fall into the darkness
once escaped
i loved you so
but away you stay
will i stay or go
i must stay to
live on
home you are once more


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mged
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1 posted 2007-04-26 10:26 AM


this was hard to put into words, but i had to do something to get it of my chest. a friend that i knew died. who i knew for such a short time so ya this is hard to talk about
MannyNelemi
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since 2007-04-27
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2 posted 2007-04-27 01:58 PM


very emotional...i always like poems like these...it made me feel sad but i like it!
mged
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3 posted 2007-04-27 03:37 PM


Thanks MannyNelemi
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4 posted 2007-05-02 12:24 PM


awe this was so sad.. thanks for all the replies to my poems..
and tx for sharing...
hunnie

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ladylisa
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5 posted 2007-06-04 07:44 AM


a loss is always hard but these words help us understand. enjoyed this.
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