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Dark Poetry #4

When undotted i's stumble

dwgpoet
Member

since 2007-03-05

Posts 122
FL, USA

0 posted 2007-04-17 02:18 AM

When Woe to the man;
“Who trips up these little ones;”
with a long parade of eulogizers:
colorless, miles underground;
Who say “the soul lives somewhere.”

Whose dreams pass sons through the fire;
Where “‘no light will ever shine’”
hope on their earth quandary,
their dead-end alley: “tested
in War?” “Why were humans here?”

Whose charmers see a Triad
image in aborted eyes;
“where singers are never heard;”
only embryos’ womb cries;
“night cobra, creation Myth;”

Whose data transfer online
imbues a black holes collapse;
where gravitational force
induce technophobia;
“where no craftsman is there found;”

Whose totem poles transform sports;
incarnating millionaires;
where steroids masked FDA?;
where apocalyptic cries
“unconscious is beat the snitch!;”

Where no millstone is there heard;
where wives cheat alimony;
“and no bride is ever heard
in you again; because your ...
for by your ... all were misled.”

rrrstop
Junior Member

since 2007-04-21

Posts 27
Florida

1 posted 2007-04-21 01:01 PM

7657 - excellent. You've been watching television with a remote, haven't you?

I like your e-black hole metaphor, seeing as the whole shebang is overexpanded like a supergiant star or pyramid scheme now. (Not talkin' about a dot-com boom, just basic infrastructure... and so much greed loaded onto it!)

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