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Dark Poetry #4

Kill me, Heal me

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

0 posted 2003-11-26 11:06 PM

This fear
it hurts
this heart
it bleeds.

May I ask a favor of sympathy?
kill me
I'll give you my soul
heal me
i'll give you my life

This game
it hurts
this song
it bleeds

Will you consider my request?
kill me
I will pass from one shadow to the next
heal me
I'll be yours forever

This game -
this fear
it hurts
this song -
this heart
it bleeds

I am at the end of my recoil
I have no more miles left to win
kill me, heal me.
the choice is yours.

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2003-11-27 12:58 PM

river this is a really passionate poem, nice write, it also kind of sound like a song...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

2 posted 2003-11-27 01:05 AM

thanx eor...maybe i'll try to put some music to it on my guitar sometime. =)

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2003-11-27 11:03 PM

I like it. Good poem. It could be a song.

GIS

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[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

4 posted 2003-11-27 11:10 PM

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