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FSU2010A New Member
since 2007-03-26
Posts 5 |
Time slides by as I stand at attention. No sanctuary found behind these heavy lids, as you slip out of focus. Is that really you? Or am I dreaming awake again? The moon comes and goes like my mind fades in and out. The world forced down a telescope and I peer through backwards wonder why its got to be. Two days without any rest tryin to kick this monster off my back But I'm getting pushed arouns, kicked around from here there and there to here. Tired of my worn out welcome, no place to call home no place of my own. Its head bores into my heart the ceiling offers no heaven my only way out isn't up but from side to side. My body full of chills, motion escapes through each limb as the dam breaks once again. This warm water only serves to heighen my chills. When will this all leave me? When can I just slip away? Paralyzed by aches, cramps and my fleeting mind. Just on this side of loosing it all but well past all insanity. When will all that was merged with tommorow or next? Still no in time for tonight's collapse or the collection of yesterdays. These heavy burdens peer down and scoff at my struggles |
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Kitherion Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 181Johannesburg |
Now why wouldn't I be nice? I like your poem... but sometimes your grammer and language gets away from you. Other than that awesome. "Our Father who art in Heaven... Hallowed be thy name..." |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
I loved your poem. I hope to see more from you soon. Thanks for sharing with us. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I really like this it was good...hope to read more soon. hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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