Dark Poetry #4 |
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Evening Falls |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada ![]() |
It feels good to shut the door at the end of the workday, not let it spill over into evening, to lie prone and still and learn to spread my mind wide, as the universe is. I cannot fly like a bird, except in wild, free dreams. At the height where the birds disappear I see clouds make pointed angel wings that stream past the sunset, then shred into plain gray clouds. When night comes, I am content looking up at a thin moon pricked through the clouds and stars shaped like people and animals dancing the earth’s dances. They are the avis of earth’s turning. I see in the dark, a denser dark following me. Soon darkness embraces me. I fall asleep as the halogen beams of light disappear on a breath of wind. |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
tut tut.. Some of the better poems go by without any replies. I really liked this. hunnie ![]() ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
I don't mean to dishonor this poem by saying what is obvious but " Nice Work". "One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came" |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
luved it! |
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