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~Death Reaper~
New Member

since 2007-03-10

Posts 4

0 posted 2007-03-10 04:15 PM

((Before you read this. It is not a poem that presents suicide as a answer. It's about a friend that commited suicide a week ago.))

Point the gun at my head;
put the bullet in my brain,
Feel all it stack up,
the almost unbearable pain.

Thinking you gone so far away from me;
No one really knows how you made me feel,
On the darkest of nights you held me close,
but why does your death have to feel so real?

You had the lips of deceit,
The heart of a murderer.
A self murderer whom only wanted a family,
a love to hold on to.

You were shattered my broken dreams,
you were broken by a soul,
a soul that covered a heart,
a heart that hated,
a hate that killed,
that killed you inside.

It was an epic of time wasted,
the hurt I tried to heal,
because you’re dead,
now it’s my turn to have the pain to feel.

Now the forgotten faces are breaking clear,
tears running down there cheeks,
into the night where they forget their fear.
Where the love never speaks.

So turn the other way,
keep your back to me,
never turn back,
and forget to ever see.

In the dark you were my light,
a little dim, and yet so bright.

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

1 posted 2007-03-11 12:54 PM

Very sad.

Told only through true loss.

I liked it a lot.

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

2 posted 2007-03-22 04:54 PM

the hurt I tried to heal,
because you’re dead,
now it’s my turn to have the pain to feel.

It's sad how people don't realize how badly it will hurt those around them if they were to commit suicide. Those people can't just stop and drop dead they have to keep going on with the memory of that loved one lost forever. It's a horrible thing and it seems such a terrible waste.

Never saw you before (I haven't been here for awhile though) So welcome to pip!

(Sorry for the loss of your friend)

Lots of hugs
Kira

~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

mged
Junior Member

since 2007-03-29

Posts 39
ND

3 posted 2007-03-29 04:03 PM

That was hard to read. So very hard only a person that was put through that position could say something so very deep. I am sorry for your loss

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