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Inside Myself |
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butterflylp Junior Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 11ky,usa |
I try to pretend it doesn't matter, that I don't notice but it's always there right beside me sometimes it's my only companion. Just outside-they come and go often they look inside sometimes they stay briefly but only "it" is constantly there. I can't remember when I didn't have it all my life, every moment right there, never going away forever with me, inside myself. What is "it"? How did I come to have "it"? I don't know, I have always felt it always seen it, known it. As I get older it becomes stronger, closer, crowding in on me I can't keep it out even when I'm inside myself. "It" is loneliness ever present always reminding me of it's presence, unstoppable. I have never had anyone who seemed to break through For short periods I sometimes thought they had But then they were gone and it was still there taunting me, insisting that it will stay until I am no longer. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
as an image-i enjoy it as a person i have experianced it arthur |
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butterflylp Junior Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 11ky,usa |
thanks for reading my poem authur. i'm new here and wasn't sure that i'd get any replies. i really appreciate it. |
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RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
I really loved this~ But then they were gone and it was still there taunting me, insisting that it will stay until I am no longer. It does feel like a dead end but what a wonderful challenge as well, to discover. ~Best Regards,Raven Smith |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
I enjoyed this a great deal. Some of the words are so well written, there vividly appearing in my head right now. Writing, painting, sports, whatever hobbie you might have, letting out your feelings into a different venue is always important in moving forward in life. Keep on writing, I look forward to what you have to offer. |
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