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Death Cut and Quiet
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Death Cut and Quiet |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Shhh hehehehe SHhhhh Little ones innocent of logical thought Harsh cruelty engulfing life Massive warm silence all is still Pale recovery remaining shoe ... I watched from a distance as the heat rose The walls caved in I can still see it happen Try to see it happen Very playful imagination What didn't happen the secrets forever lost, but I know I watched it happen I watched them burn hurt i can still see Stray bolt of fire Apathy Collaspe into something else Deeper in the Earth the foundation of hell Ignorance and rotten empty shells Numb rattled stare I know Cold Reporters will come The law will come family They will all come I'm bleeding My secret of what happened Shhhh Their burning screams Shhh This blood flows freely now ... ... ... Flows and flows Drip by drip Quiet drip drip drip drip Closed will remain closed until opened. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
ooo kaayy...somebody's been watching the Outer Limits again...Craig, i told you, that show is bad for you. baaad. uh oh. i hear something. *turns white* hee hee. hehehe. ok, i'll stop now,  . if you where trying to make this gruesome...er...good job, *gag* talk to ya laters. - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A nice little tale of what can happen when feelings go unchecked... Good for folks to be reminded, huh? That IS what you were tryin for here, wasn't it? Cause if not, I can see were this could get moderated for gratuitous violence. Nice write itchy....vivid |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Craig, you describe Death here exactly as you have titled . . . Cut and Quiet well done xxoo |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like this piece because of its harsh rawness. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Such a variety of responses, Yeah this is a little violent, but I didnt want to write the way I usually do where its just life bothering me. I wanted to get a little gritty and I did. Sorry if it offended anyone. GIS Closed will remain closed until opened. |
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