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living in the darkness |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I've lived in the darkness, I've lived all these lies, you only see me, as what you despise, I feel the cold on my skin, the heat in your face, moving at me with a deadly pace, you might hate me today, but you'll love me tomorrow, don't mistake my hate with this look of sorrow, I live in this darkness, I see all of your lies, death is left with the voice of goodbyes. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ [This message has been edited by hunnie_girl (02-02-2007 08:42 PM).] |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Your just getting better (even if you are stealing my titles) Love this To take a lot of pain, |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
haha thanks Walter, hmmm well I keep doing that I've stole so many title without realizing it hmmm Must be my awesome memory. hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
I think you did an amazing job on this. I hope to see more from you hunnie. Thanks for sharing with us. |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
Excellent as always hunnie. I think i'll use that title as well. "One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came" |
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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
This is soooo good. I loved it. this is going in my fav`s |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
thank you all for replying  hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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