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unpredictable_mortal Junior Member
since 2007-01-27
Posts 10Malaysia |
Meet me at the sight of death, Before the time comes, We’ll make sure we’ll be dead, A slow, long dance, Before the pale moonlight, A cry of madness within your soul, Solace we seek in each other’s embrace. Look onto the earth of treachery, How we long for peace at the moment. Look into the eyes of a wild beast, How we long silence to come in an instant. Death, a step to eternity, Before us, a ball of fire resurrected our soul, Call my name before you step into judgment, Don’t leave me crying in a corner. Towards the light now love, Forgive my sins. Don’t look back to be searched by me, As I’ll no longer be there to be seek. Breathe the air of death, Tell your soul you’ll be fine, Just don’t hold back, As I’ll be gone by now. |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
I really enjoyed this one. These few lines really struck a chord with me.... "Before the pale moonlight, A cry of madness within your soul, Solace we seek in each other’s embrace." A very deep and fluid poem, really well done. Nice one. |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Really enjoyed readin and hope to see more of your works here. p.s Hardly find Malaysians here :-) Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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carolinabeen Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 69 |
-The Light of Day- the stacks they rise, high into the sky more and more they say, more and more every day plumes of smoke rise, into the filling skies slightly harmful they say, slightly harmful they pray this we must stand, this for the good of man what could go wrong, the dinosaurs are gone we cower high within these towers we shun the light of day the holes are dug, far beneath the rug deeper and deeper they say, deeper and deeper every day the dirt piles high, it joins the sky defined to a tee, defined for you and me the proverb was said, this i've read it's been said before, on some solemn shore deep within our holes, deep within our souls we shun the light of day some changed their roles, jumped out of their holes hidden was the light, for it was night decided was the moon, it furthered the gloom it had refused to shine, for your eyes and mine many search within, many never begin many spread wings and fly, many crash and die so they relenquish their roles, jump back in their holes we shun the light of day J.L. Koehler |
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carolinabeen Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 69 |
Just meant that all can, and will. Great write and please, as I beg on my own door, write. If no more and bygone by now, well at least I heard it your way. |
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