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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Caught in this time in this place, there's broken feelings I cannot replace, I can feel nothing but these tears on my face, I feel like i'm nothing to you, and I really don't know what I should do, I know you're hurting but I am too, here is the decision that might change my life, here are the words that could cut like a knife, if death could fix it i'd end this strife, but death is only a thought in my head, really it won't change the things that we said, it's not a solution, 'cos I don't want to be dead. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
It’s just a situation That calls for tears and pain Survival of the fittest Life is a funny game There is no simple answer Just up and have some fun Remember well this Cliché The best is yet to come! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
thanks I guess fairplay for the presence of your rhyme I get it. having fun haha... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
my friend remeber... death is to soon and life is to long |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow thanks Becca that will keep my mind flowing all day, such insight  thanks...hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Amazing hunnie. I think it's a thought that goes through everyone's head but we can't fix anything in this life if we're dead. Kira (Sending love, prayers and hershy's chocolate) |
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Idontmindyouundermyskin Junior Member
since 2007-01-29
Posts 32 |
Ive had the thought too. Everyday. But what Kiro Aso said really hit me. It's true. I liked the poem though. |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
I've never had thouhgts of death, even in my darkest of moments... I have used that pain and released it in my writing, in my art, in my knitting... turned it into positive energy, it doesn't go away, this pain, but you feel accomplished and it makes it easier to bare it. Enjoyed reading your piece... thanks for sharing Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
Sad poem but I enjoyed it. I wish I had protected happiness as I do now. I think, when younger, happiness wasnt my treasure but more like if it came good and if not, battle on. I think I hold it so dearly now that ugly relationships have no room anymore. Thanks for sharing your poem. I enjoyed it! ~Best Regards,Raven Smith |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Looks like your better than me at this now. You found your voice. Loving every word and rythem. To take a lot of pain, |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
Nothin' I can say that hasn't been said. Good poem. |
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