Dark Poetry #4 |
Round World |
eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
Round World In a world of round holes, I am a square peg Never to fit inside a glide that feels comfortable As fragile as an egg, Surroundings uncomfortable I am a square peg in a round world, Finding out that each one in the next Is all the same Never changed, The square peg in a world of round, Outside this standard deviation of a bell curve, Not to fit Nor will it ever I am the square peg in your round world. "So what befalls the flawless? |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
I love the theme repetition in this, a chant that draws attention to your premise. Sparticus Even with insects- |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
thanks for the read and input... "So what befalls the flawless? |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Nicely done, I enjoyed the metaphors. |
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cosmic-duality Junior Member
since 2003-11-24
Posts 14 |
your words really resenate with me. Nicely done. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Different than "usual" as if there is a usual. I don't seem to fit in with too many people either, so I can relate. GIS Closed will remain closed until opened. |
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