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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
To those who live and wallow in hate and those who deserve their fate To those who can’t seem to get anything right and those who just can’t sleep at night To those that have tough crosses to bear and those who really couldn’t care To those who cry when no ones looking and those who do all the cooking To those that feel ten feet tall and those who feel really small To those who know when their beaten and those who end up getting eaten To those that have given up on love and those who look to God above To those who are empty and feel like hell and those whose feeling’s they’ll never tell To those that know there’s no redemption and those who have too many sins to mention This is to those who believe that their the only one’s Because in reality there are tons and tons |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Well put.. we are who.. go that way..not so obscure,and alone... Click |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Happy you liked it! Thanx much!!! Kira |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
this poem deserved more respnse than it got arthur |
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butterflylp Junior Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 11ky,usa |
i love this poem. i have been one of "those". |
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chiLanta Junior Member
since 2006-12-01
Posts 47 |
wow that poem is good b/c it is so tru when people r going through things it does feel like your all alone |
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RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
Enjoyed the wisdom in this poem. I loved how you closed this," This is to those who believe that their the only one’s Because in reality there are tons and tons." It sure can help one to relinquish a lingering pity party. Great insight in your poem. Thank you. ~Best Regards,Raven Smith |
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