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Dark Poetry #4

"My Pain"

Eli
Junior Member

since 2006-12-23

Posts 10

0 posted 2006-12-26 06:08 AM

"My Pain"

The pain is unbeleiveble
She just doesnt care
I wanna cry, i want it to go away
Leave me alone.

The hate, the love and the unknown
She makes me want to go crazy
Im going crazy someone save me
Save me from my own demise.

The cage i have traped my self in
With all my mistakes
They are always there to remind me what i might be missing
I just want to forget.

secret_truth_lies
Member

since 2006-11-14

Posts 74

1 posted 2006-12-29 07:12 PM

I'm right there with ya. I know what you are going through. If I find a way out, I'll be sure to tell you. But until then, I hope to see more of your poems on here. You did a great job on this. Make sure to go back and re-read your poem, the last paragraph you put "traped." I know I'm quite picky, I hope to see more from you though. Thanks for sharing with us though.

trUstNooNe
Member

since 2006-05-21

Posts 91

2 posted 2007-01-01 08:31 PM

i can deff relate to this, wow really nice way to express how you feel...great! write!

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