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sleeping_beauty23 Junior Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 12Ontario, Canada |
rustling slowly, moving tentatively, moving with a destination. fantasizing with apathy, when possible. tentatively silently screaming, passively dreaming futures to imagine, slowly emerging when possible. |
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secret_truth_lies Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 74 |
Hey me and you are new members at this site. Welcome to PIP. I hope it will be fun here. I really like this. You did a good job on this. I hope to see more from you |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
It sticks then like rust does it not? Will it not? Apathy I Empathize. Words paint a portrait, i see a forest at night and something moving across a dreamscape, yourself? Tired and dishoveled, altered and uneven. A solid shell, but an inside that is always moving, under a moon, still dreaming But only when possible... but always... always.. moving are you? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Welcome to Passions! It is a lovely place. I hope you like it here as much as I do. And an interesting write.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Draugluin Junior Member
since 2006-12-08
Posts 48Ontario, Canada |
I like the "nervy" feel to this, I can relate. Nice. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Welcome to pip. very descriptive write very nice... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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carolinabeen Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 69 |
emerge more destroy before challenge behind inside love to know J.L. Koehler |
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sleeping_beauty23 Junior Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 12Ontario, Canada |
thank you for all your comments xo |
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