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zigwield
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0 posted 2006-11-13 11:57 AM


a rainy day
today
with empty feelings
today
with no meat
today
a learning day
today
a k to the k
today
a double three
today

oh yes
i am trying as hard as i can

because of the
sorrow i have


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1 posted 2006-11-13 11:53 PM


good beggining but the end kinda lost it's flow i think but good write...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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