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Excruciate |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I told you not to look. sleep unto a world of dark and utter despair lives unfolded on a page of crumbs and ink of tears fold these passions tear these lines grim sought discussion in brown and yellow lies yet hope amidst fake water resounds resound this voice fear released for but a moment still dying, still crying still seeking relief of anguish bleed into the pain blame this shame upon those creatures black cold heartless murderers follow not the haunting voices sink beneath the shadows and remember this no more |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
very well done |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
thank you Brad |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
heartless murderers...bastards...anyways like this one river... "So what befalls the flawless? |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
you SAID it eor  Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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