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Dark Poetry #4

To My Unborn Child

lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

0 posted 2006-11-08 09:48 PM

I’m sorry for what he did to you
For the pain he caused

You were wanted
I imagined you beautiful

You were innocence stolen
Heartbreak known

Pure and perfect
The child I’ll never know

I’m sorry he hurt you
It was never your fault

You’re a rose picked
Before it could blossom

A whisper
Lost in the breeze

I’m sorry I told him
I wanted to save you

If only my tears
Could bring you back

My beautiful unborn child

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

1 posted 2006-11-23 10:57 PM

It's sad when u lose something so precious as a unborn child... really like the flow of works as it was simple and hearfelt...

Jazvina Lahre

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

2 posted 2006-11-27 04:02 PM

thanks, it's certainly a hard feeling to put into words, i can only hope i did it justice.

Venus1974
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 79
Tennessee, USA

3 posted 2006-12-10 09:40 PM

Touching and sad...yet beautiful too...Its hard to express so many feelings in so short a poem but, u did it...good job. Sorry for your loss.

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

4 posted 2006-12-11 03:32 PM

beautiful arthur

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