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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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0 posted 2006-11-07 11:51 AM



I'm confused and I don't understand
Like a sword pointed at my face
I can't steer this course anymore
This path is finished and
My mistakes are final
But so are the happy days
And the art will show its heart in this way

Wisdom and acts of war played their part
Though you're right here I can't even see you
We've been separated by the sword
Where you go I can not take part
Your breath, secrets and little foxes knew
Why did you reject the glorious Lord
He would have played well in your heart

Some parts of knowledge I'll never understand
But I do remember it only takes once
Life is run on hills and valleys
And the pressures of this life suck
At any rate thank you for showing me
Even when I wasn't listening
You're still my dad, and the only I will ever have

When the chain that holds my wallet
So tight and snug is broken,
Do I find the truth,
That I really own nothin.

© Copyright 2006 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
niere
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since 2006-04-23
Posts 77

1 posted 2006-11-10 09:42 AM


Beautiful words, they're very sharp, yet still very touching and sad.

''At any rate thank you for showing me
Even when I wasn't listening
You're still my dad, and the only I will ever have''

Beautiful lines...

I don't know what else to say except I'm sorry, and I hope you and all your family get through this.

God bless.

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2006-11-11 10:59 AM


thank you.  
God bless you as well.
-GIS

When the chain that holds my wallet
So tight and snug is broken,
Do I find the truth,
That I really own nothin.

niere
Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 77

3 posted 2006-11-14 06:36 PM


No problem.

God bless.

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