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Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28
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0 posted 2006-10-31 07:22 AM


Counter Argument

Why is it that when I don’t talk or I have a change in my walk,
I have issues or I’m crazy?

I don’t talk, I’m crazy
I work alone, I’m crazy
Acting weird, I’m crazy,
Maybe you’re just too lazy to crawl through that mazy cave that holds my understanding, which explains me.
Maybe I don’t talk because you don’t entertain me,
In character, I don’t change lanes so that you can’t pain me.
You don’t understand, I sustain me,
Don’t try and change me!
My tranquility and peace refrains me.
Not a spec of blood of you,
What goes through these veins is all me.

So even when I’m old and I’m holding a cane,
The only thing that could stop me is a speeding train.

© Copyright 2006 Alexander Higginbottom - All Rights Reserved
writergrl
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since 2006-10-30
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1 posted 2006-10-31 01:12 PM


This is a vivid account, filled with a sound resolve...well done. (a side note: Arguement is spelled wrong, should be Argument.

writergrl

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hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2006-11-03 01:06 AM


i can relate very nice...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Walter Poe
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3 posted 2006-11-03 06:36 AM


Sounds like a rap lots of 'beat' words in there

A good rythm to

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.


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