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Counter Argument
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Counter Argument |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Counter Argument Why is it that when I don’t talk or I have a change in my walk, I have issues or I’m crazy? I don’t talk, I’m crazy I work alone, I’m crazy Acting weird, I’m crazy, Maybe you’re just too lazy to crawl through that mazy cave that holds my understanding, which explains me. Maybe I don’t talk because you don’t entertain me, In character, I don’t change lanes so that you can’t pain me. You don’t understand, I sustain me, Don’t try and change me! My tranquility and peace refrains me. Not a spec of blood of you, What goes through these veins is all me. So even when I’m old and I’m holding a cane, The only thing that could stop me is a speeding train. |
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writergrl Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 73Las Vegas, Nevada |
This is a vivid account, filled with a sound resolve...well done. (a side note: Arguement is spelled wrong, should be Argument. writergrl "You cannot stain a black coat." |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i can relate very nice... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Sounds like a rap lots of 'beat' words in there A good rythm to Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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