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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2006-10-27 06:17 AM



Reaching out to you
Hurt me more than i could know
I reached toward you the sun
and was suprised when i burned

When you know its over
So long ago been and gone
It is a mistake to believe
A mistake to believe you remember

Who is this you ask
I see it in your eyes
It tears at me love forgotten
then your casual dismissal

I see the blankness in you
where once i sat safe
I feel the space once mine
I do not know if it holds another

The rain falls heavy
soaking me in its casual warmth
around me it is all i feel
within me it is all i feel

This will be my last breath
My last memory of you
the touch of angels tears
falling on a broken heart  

Perhaps it was a mistake coming here

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.


© Copyright 2006 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-29 07:40 AM


I really like this. You did an Awesome job, I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing with us.
writergrl
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since 2006-10-30
Posts 73
Las Vegas, Nevada
2 posted 2006-10-31 03:26 PM


you captured a lost love so well, thank you for sharing.

writergrl

"You cannot stain a black coat."
Nicholas Nickleby

spare_key
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3 posted 2006-10-31 10:57 PM



Such an ache in these words. There was much power in these words that seemed to be spoken so quietly. Almost as if they wept in silence. Wow!


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4 posted 2006-10-31 11:52 PM


very east to read flow hope to read more soon...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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