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Perhaps it was a mistake
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Perhaps it was a mistake |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Reaching out to you Hurt me more than i could know I reached toward you the sun and was suprised when i burned When you know its over So long ago been and gone It is a mistake to believe A mistake to believe you remember Who is this you ask I see it in your eyes It tears at me love forgotten then your casual dismissal I see the blankness in you where once i sat safe I feel the space once mine I do not know if it holds another The rain falls heavy soaking me in its casual warmth around me it is all i feel within me it is all i feel This will be my last breath My last memory of you the touch of angels tears falling on a broken heart Perhaps it was a mistake coming here Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
I really like this. You did an Awesome job, I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing with us. |
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writergrl Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 73Las Vegas, Nevada |
you captured a lost love so well, thank you for sharing. writergrl "You cannot stain a black coat." |
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spare_key New Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 6Some where out there... |
Such an ache in these words. There was much power in these words that seemed to be spoken so quietly. Almost as if they wept in silence. Wow! Spare_Key @-->-- |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
very east to read flow hope to read more soon... hunnie*  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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