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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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0 posted 2006-10-17 02:57 PM


                     LOVE

            What is love?
            Where does it come from?
            Does it come from above?
            Can you touch it?
            Do you feel it?
            Do you adore it?
            Why do we need it?
            Why doesn't it love us back?
            or is it something that we all lack?
            Does love, love you?
            Or is it something we all go through?

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AltairVonCreed
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since 2006-10-16
Posts 14
Nephi, Utah.
1 posted 2006-10-18 02:01 AM


Love; the thing we treasure most.
When we have it we tend to boast;
Like a young lad, mesmorized.
Fallen and caught by those crystaline eyes.

Who ask what is love; It is what drives most through the day.
And shelters them through the night.
It comes and goes, like water.
It's current, you cannot fight.

***

Beautiful peice, and for me it seems to indulge in alot of thought.

PoetrySinger
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since 2006-10-16
Posts 54

2 posted 2006-10-18 03:11 PM


What is love
love is power
love is grace
can't you tell by the
smile on my face
must you ignore it
its really there'
its really love and I will
share


cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

3 posted 2006-10-19 02:35 PM


man those are so good. They are better then mine. Thanks for replying you guys.
patience_iago
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since 2006-08-30
Posts 54

4 posted 2006-10-21 06:34 PM


I really enjoyed reading this peice.

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali

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