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Dark Poetry #4

I'm in love

zigwield
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 61

0 posted 2006-10-12 10:19 AM

with the most beautiful elephant
of this awfull world
and all i want is to be
with this good animal
and its polite manners
(zena)

with the most lazy cow
of this dark moments
and whenever i think
of this large animal
it is so agressive
(yelo)

These are the two
supernaturally ugly (tremendously iahh)
animalistic creatures
so unhuman, so extraterrestial
that i truly love
more than anything else
today in this world

these are the two carbonated units
that i adore most
these are the two loves
that i cannot reject!!!

zivieli !!!

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-20 09:31 AM

Awww...that was so good. I really like that how you used animal for people. You did a great job on this. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing.
Courtney

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