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Dark Poetry #4

Could you feel?

TwiztidKarma
Junior Member

since 2006-09-22

Posts 43
Florida

0 posted 2006-10-09 07:45 PM

   From my heart the wind beats hard,
   Harsh and despair, Fly around in its night filled
   air,
    And as I see you I try to feel,
  But feel I cannot,
And invisible tears, How can I explain?
Begin to clot,
I'd rather be hit with 32 point blank shots,

A blind man feels for he cannot see,
But the things I see,
Would make you feel, Dead, Cold,
And blind for eternity,

  Some say its crucial G,
To just let it b,
But thats what I did,
I just let it b,

And so as you see,
Death stares at me,
Through that twiztid glass mirror,
So please dont pray for me,
And think you can simply walk'eth up,
And save'eth me,
  For I am death you see,
   Pain is all that resides in me,

Love has jaded,
Tears have faded,
Crimson red to ease the dead,
For I have bled,
  their tears unshed.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-10 06:51 PM

OMG that was really good. but don't think of dying. it's not a good thing. But your emotions get across the board very well. Thanks for sharing with us. I hope to see more from you in the future.

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