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Dark Poetry #4

This simple thought

TwiztidKarma
Junior Member

since 2006-09-22

Posts 43
Florida

0 posted 2006-09-25 12:25 PM

  I sigh as I begin,
  My little battle rant,
   Better step up to me like an action ant.


        My common sense driils through,
          Absolutley you,

           Clinging to baby blue,
         Like an absent, tactical attack,

         Ill never be a rule,
      Im looked upon as an ugly, grotesque fool,
    And now im just a tool,

       That you think is absolutley drop dead cool.

    My poetry heart,
   Is grey and dreary dark,
  This way come, the shadow's may lark,
  Does it embrace your happy heart embark?
  This aint my fun amusement park,

    All I seem to do is

       SCREAM LOUD WITH MY EXCLAMATION MARK!


              And still unheard , Fills the head,
                    The heart still black ,
                              From tears unshed.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-09-25 11:08 AM

man that's really sad. But you did an excellent job on this poem. Thanks for sharing with us and hope to see more from you in the future.
Courtney

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