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powerxxx Junior Member
since 2006-09-21
Posts 17 |
Death... The biggest mystery... who knows what might come, the things may be well, or it my be turn into to hell, we live, trying in our lives to give all that is required for us to live, death, comes suddenly, young or old , strong or weak, death is the fate of all, nomatter if you're sad or happy, your path ends in death, thats humanity's ending sentence. It's always the same With This pain Young but i am dying just like in a video game Why is everyone so blind Help is writen next to my name The hatered building itself without anything in it to tame I have nothing left to claim And no friends to gain Now, my soul won't stop feeling pain My heart is just not the same.... anymore My hope crushed followed by goal I'm sitting here waiting for the death of my soul waiting for everything in me to die inside, underneath My soul blood stained skies That never tried to rise are setting my hearts feeling's on fire withe fire flies It doesn't if one of my feelings die I would never say " Oh, My" and even if i die no one will be here next to my corpse to cry All that i've known will be there just to unbound the tie and leave me there to suffer as i say " Why?" death is left here next to me as i lie Here under the sky Watching the moon saying it's last good bye And i close my eyes Never to open again The life i once knew Dies... |
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TwiztidKarma Junior Member
since 2006-09-22
Posts 43Florida |
I like it |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Man I feel what you feel right now and I know what you are going through. I might be further in though. But I like how you got your feelings across the reader. You did an Excellent job on this. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing with us. Courtney |
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