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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california 
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Little bow creep Herding black sheep Into the abyss of heaven A logic lost leader Preserving a pleader Who committed commandment seven "The worst vice is advice" (Al Pacino, devil's advocate) |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
This is a very strongly phrased piece that reads almost like a Limerick. A lot of that comes from the short lines with rhymes, etc. Enjoyed it! Sparticus |
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