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Dark Poetry #4

Hypocrite

nostalgic*pride
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since 2006-08-23

Posts 122
NowhereVille

0 posted 2006-09-13 11:13 AM

You paint such a different picture
Than I see with my eyes
Where you're a holy saint
And we tell naught but lies

But in truth you're a hypocrite
The one that we should blame
You're the ever loving matriarch
That drove us all insane

How the Hell are we supposed to retort
Your accusations are so juvenile
Maybe you'd better see our point
If you walked in our shoes for a while

I'm left here bloody and dying
While you scream 'suicide!'
What the Hell are you going on about
You killed me, we're both out of our minds

deceitful_siren
Junior Member

since 2006-09-14

Posts 20
USA

1 posted 2006-09-14 12:27 PM

Oooh, I like this one. Feel priveleged to be the first to comment. Great job!!

JenniferMaxwell

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since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

2 posted 2006-09-14 02:40 PM

A very powerful poem that gets your message across loud and clear. Well done!

xpyrox04x
New Member

since 2006-06-28

Posts 7

3 posted 2006-09-14 05:19 PM

I'd have to say, in the last paragraph you touch on a very sensitive subject, i think you have protrayed it very wel. It is well written and a very good read, induces lots of thoughts within my own mind, thank you for posting it

Philmont
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since 2004-01-10

Posts 61

4 posted 2006-09-16 10:57 PM

Yeah the last line sums it up, including why he's a hypocrite. He's prolly a hypocrite because he doesn't believe what he goes on about anymore but he doesn't want to show it. He'd look week, you know?

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