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Shaddow1 Junior Member
since 2006-09-04
Posts 41Kingman Az, USA |
I would like every one who reads this to know that the way it is written is the way it is supost to be written. I wrote this origanally as a rap. I hope you all like it. Society Wanting all my feeling to subside whishing for there something to hide waiting impatiently for something that will never come I just want to be numb I look out side and think our world is beautiful then I realize I’m a fool nothings beautiful nothings pure its full of hatred and fear full of guns and drugs nothing but wanna be thugs guns and hate they will set our fate nothing goes right in this life just dealin with the pain and the strife rumors going all around will the truth every be found enemy's and no friends this is how our world ends in pain and despair cuz love now is really rare no one u can trust but trust you must no one getting cared about all you hear is people shout mass murders, suicide no where u can run and hide you can’t get away there's no where to stay kids are getting pregnant at 13 tweaker’s everywhere are seen what’s this world coming to judgment day is past due everyone needs to stop and look around look at today’s society by which our children are bound we have been trying for so long to make our world a better place but just look at your child’s face look at the pain in their eyes can’t you hear their unspoken cries our technology is killing us man some one please take a stand show em’ that you care that your there cuz again look around just as fast as you hear a pin drop you could be hell ward bound Love is like a Rose; it always dies - Britney Miller |
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lanaia74 Member
since 2006-08-25
Posts 67 |
AWESOME! Sadly, your words hold such truth! |
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riet Junior Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 19Australia |
I can hear the rhythm. Deep writing. And referring to these lines: 'our technology is killing us man some one please take a stand' it seems like, someone has taken a stand. Good work |
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