Dark Poetry #4 |
The Red in the Night |
lanaia74 Member
since 2006-08-25
Posts 67 |
There goes another siren wailing as it tuns on to our street Me wondering to who's house it may be going Gosh, the ambulance stopped right across the street I hate to hear the ambulance siren sing. Curiosity makes a lot of us stand outside and stare Not suspecting murder had invaded our domain Of this murderer do we have to beware? Now we have to be on guard, there is a person running around that's insane. We were told the lady that lived here was stabbed to death We will be on our utmost guard I don't think any of us are ready to take our last breath We will all try to be careful, we will really try. I didn't notice you as you cautiously walked by I had no idea or suspicion you were even here Why didn't you tell me you knew her? I want to know why. I just don't understand why you didn't tell me, this is very unclear. I walk back toward our house as there is nothing left to see I just remember I have to do something around the house I hear water running, then I see you, making the water as red as can be Now I know the truth, you louse. |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Awww... this was a very emotional poem. I feel your pain. I liked your words though. I hope you feel better and I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing. ~Courtney~ |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Just checked out your AngelFire collection. Seems you've been at this for a while, and kudos for that! Keep it up. Definitely enjoy seeing your face popping up everywhere around the boards, and it is nice to see someone take the time to respond genuinely. |
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