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Dark Poetry #4

R.I.P.

cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

0 posted 2006-08-13 08:05 PM

Headstone... a butterfly lands softly on an angel.
As I stare at an angle, I can see your face.
The one that was filled with grace.
I'm sorry I never met you, I'm also sorry that you died from a heartattack.
I bet grandma felt like crap.My mom never really had the chance to meet you. You died 3 months before she had the chance for you to hold her in your arms.
My mom and I heard stories of what you did for your four daughters. Everybody said that you were a great father. You made them eat everything on their plates from dinner.
Sometimes they wouldn't even get dessert.
That's how they got thinner.
Grandma always called you Rip, I don't know the reason why? When you passed away, I bet the whole world cried!

Dedicated to: Ralston Regan 9/66
Died from a heart attack.

secret_truth_lies
Member

since 2006-11-14

Posts 74

1 posted 2006-12-29 08:45 PM

Dang you never met that person and yet you still write about him. I like it. I hope he led a happy life until that point. You did a nice job on this. I hope to see more from you in the future chica.

secret_truth_lies
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since 2006-11-14

Posts 74

2 posted 2007-01-03 03:54 PM

Just to get this rolling, cuz I don't see anybody eles commenting. It's such a good story/poem. I seriously think that other people can relate to this. But eh... I love ya chica.

click1
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since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

3 posted 2007-01-04 02:43 AM

respect...and tribute...Well done!!!

Click

Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

4 posted 2007-01-04 03:25 PM

Wow!
Very well done.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

5 posted 2007-04-24 08:07 PM

Thanks you all that replied. I too like this one. My great grandma always talks about him and shows pics. but I just wish that i could have met the guy. Soi wrote a poem for him.

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