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Dark Poetry #4

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Artofmark
Junior Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 41

0 posted 2006-08-10 09:18 PM

Moving quickly, doth death
through the night's wind
Seeking one's soul consuming thy breath
Standing aloft thy bossom
Entralling all beneath his feet
Thresher cleaving
as thou they are wheat
Darkness and gloom
his ambience shrounded by deceit
souls weaved as loom
just or unjust death comes
without a choice
he comes unwanted
no face no voice

Sorrow
Member

since 2006-06-14

Posts 83
Ireland

1 posted 2006-08-11 10:58 AM

I like the way you make this characther sound like the essense of evil. It's a very haunting write. I like it!

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

2 posted 2006-08-11 07:38 PM

I like the whole poem, I just don't like the meaning behind it. Yeah death is unwanted but yeah I don't know what I'm getting with this so don't read this.......

But I thought it was very good other then what I said up above... just don't even bother reading that.

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