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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
The hero walks away I am nothing I've never been anything Raw My head hits the floor It hurts Pure real Pain Hurt him, make him pay The diseased child 20 year old infant stupid Don't trust him Crazy, disgust, disease Sickness Hate me They all hate me They all hate me My head hurts Don't touch me Stay away Shut up Celebrate the hero Hurt him, make him pay The diseased child 20 year old infant Stupid Don't trust him Crazy, disgust, disease Sickness You want me to leave I will You say I won't This is real All that is great once was small. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
You know what i think about your work Craig =) i especially digged the ending too. - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanx River. GIS All that is great once was small. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
nice write, i loved the line 20 year old infant, sometimes it does feel that way huh? "So what befalls the flawless? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
sometimes it feels like I still have a bottle in my mouth. GIS |
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