Dark Poetry #4 |
Humility and Abandonment |
green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
My feathered path of life Based entirely on each and every decision That I make I can do the right thing Fear that pin-prick decision At the very tip top of the sharpness of mind Will I tip right or will I tip wrong Demand from me Lie to me Mockery of me Handle it Craig, be a man... Don't be stupid Trust what you cannot see Redeeming me Collect a grain upon grain Just the golden dust God direct me I disobeyed and sat on the throne The rainbow which flashes from me Through me, in my blood, Wrapped tight around my spirit for all to see Stick your needles in my brain and push the tiny around Put in the state of now Get off me Jesus, I'm sorry, God bless me It's not about me Its not about me It's not about me Its not about me I've misconceived, its all about you To wrestle is to live; to fight is to love. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Hey, Craig! I think I'll let my e-mail to you serve as most of the reply to this; however, strictly from a poetic standpoint, I really and truly liked this very much. I was inside of this one when reading, and with total understanding... from perfect choice of words! Right on! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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trUstNooNe Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 91 |
wow i like that alot, but your not the only who forgets about it being all about God we all slip...nice write!* |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you. God bless, In Christ, -Craig To wrestle is to live; to fight is to love. |
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