Dark Poetry #4 |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Keep pushing, I keep calling. Keep on raising, I'm not falling So you say, "Bring it on" and I say, "It's been too long!" Look to the sky, the winds have changed. YOU will never be the same. The life you have, you hold so dear? Do not forget, that I am there. Walk, don't run, show no fear. I'm the master, of now and here! One step toward, the final end. And YOU have lost, your only friend. Click |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
Interesting. I have felt somewhat the same way a few times and could relate. "YOU will never be the same. The life you have, you hold so dear?" I especially liked this part. The question i felt was almost mocking in a way and i loved it! hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
"I'm the master, of now and here! One step toward, the final end. And YOU have lost, your only friend. " I liked this poem a lot! I guess it reminds me of all the times I had horrible "friends" and I shoved it back in their faces by telling them to get out of my life... I loved the question mark you put there also, I felt like it added a great deal to those lines. Thanks for sharing ![]() @-->--- |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Thanx!! My best friend turned on me like a wild animal....over money..of all things..LOL. I kept given', she kept takin'. I was true, she was fakin'. "It's time to call it." ~ My own dear Mother. Click |
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