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Laurie-Terra
New Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 1

0 posted 2006-07-09 12:33 PM

Unhealing heart.
Injured and bruising.
Touch my face.
Make me cry, embrace.
Cast my eye tears onto your shoulder.
Tell me what I feel right now, is forever.

Don't be sorry that I cried when you did things wrong.
Heal it, give it a place where it belongs.

That rose tinted view.
Delusive aftermath of a strangers love, and now.
Look at myself, thinking why I feel the way I do.

Just like the earth, a lonely, lost, hurt child.
Past its worser times, takes its time to heal.
But no, damaged again.
Torn in two.

Bereft in pain, I bled.
Eerie whispers trapped in my head.
Limper my soft eyes to the night sky.
One thing, helps me cope.
Starlights hope.
Please never fade.
You speak, you resonate sense.
You don't need to speak, I feel.
....
Retrieve?
But I have you back.
More, I need, I need to believe.

~Laurie Terra

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-07-09 12:43 PM

Laurie~
Welcome to PiP~

The heart is such a resilent mechanism ... it aches, it breaks ... sometimes it wears a multitude of bandaids before it is eventually healed by new love entering again, or by old love in renew~

Enjoy your stay in our poetic circle of friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-07-10 02:08 PM

Hey Laurie,

Welcome to piptalk! I hope you enjoy the site as much as I know I have. It's always nice to see a new face around here

"That rose tinted view.
Delusive aftermath of a strangers love, and now.
Look at myself, thinking why I feel the way I do."

My very favorite part out of the whole poem! That is if I had to choose a favorite part. It's so hard since there are so many good stanzas in this poem.

Thanks for sharing with all of us, I know I look forward to seeing more of your work in the near future

@-->---

trUstNooNe
Member

since 2006-05-21

Posts 91

3 posted 2006-07-22 07:34 AM

i like it!it has a nice flow to it....good job

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