Dark Poetry #4 |
Empty inside |
Alone in the dark Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 105On the edge of an abyss |
I feel like I'm trapped on a merry go round I'm spinning in circles not making a sound But I want to cry out I want someone to hear I need to be held I need someone to care It's just so confusing this life that I live I wish I could feel I have something to give But inside I'm empty so lost and afraid Bound to this life by the choices I've made |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I think we have all felt like that sometime or other. It's good you can express it with words. |
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gyrl_blue Junior Member
since 2006-06-15
Posts 20Stuck In Reality |
some days I feel open to feelings, saying to myself anything better than being numb... then when it all becomes renewed i remember why. Bound to this life by the choices I've made I think ^that says it all :) nice write A.I.T.D -No Stranger To The Rain- |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
A good write, you put down the emotions i feel a lot very nicely! "But inside I'm empty so lost and afraid Bound to this life by the choices I've made" i loved that part! I have felt that way so often! Its funny how a lot of our work echo each other. hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here |
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Alone in the dark Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 105On the edge of an abyss |
I never realized there were so many people like me out there. It's tragic how so many can relate. ^*^Angel^*^ |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
i reaaaly love this. this is amazing, the rhyme was soo flowing and not at all forced. great job with an awesome ending. peace lor as long as we laugh out loud, laugh like we're mad. because this crazy, mixed up beauty is all that we have. |
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lace_of_light Junior Member
since 2006-08-02
Posts 44 |
i know exactly how you feel. affliction is probably my middle name (and with it comes a lot of confusion). i love the poem and just try to think that you're not black, but grey. i can't seem to reach white (happy)... "areyouinorareyouout? eitherwayyoucan'twin." he said. "butthefallwillbefantasticandwhat'sleftisnothinglessthanperfection" |
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