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coyote
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077


0 posted 2003-09-26 10:48 PM


Bitch X

grew a Y chromosome
surprised she could spell it
in wet telephonics
speaking in tongues
from the pocket
she freed a worm
of cyberian proportions
kickstarted
his erectile dysfunction
and blew his brains out
with a hair dryer

all in good time
with the same
instrument
she freeze dried
and peeled
his soul

she is

addiction

[This message has been edited by coyote (09-26-2003 10:59 PM).]

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-09-27 01:19 AM


I have always been fond of the way Robert Downey Jr. expressed it, while addressing the judge about to sentence him:

"It's like I have a loaded gun in my mouth and my finger's on the trigger," Downey told a judge in 1999. "And I like the taste of the gunmetal."


This showed some deep understanding of one helluva challenge.

Peace, you.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-09-27 01:24 PM


coyote . . .

this brought me to places
I left a long time ago . . .
nice writing
xxoo

coyote
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077

3 posted 2003-09-27 05:23 PM


Thanks for reading, serenity blaze and littlewing.

I've been experimenting in the style of "Burroughs" lately.

Look around you and pull in objects and things from your environment, or pull ideas out of your head. Make a list, and then write something that contains them all.

This is what came out.

coyote 8)


Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
Canada
4 posted 2008-05-10 02:13 PM


Very intense, I feel your passion.
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