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trUstNooNe Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 91 |
(i made this poem up as i went along,tell me what you think of it,because i think it's alittle rough) Try Someone else wrote a great poem, and I don’t know them at all, but it feels like they read my thoughts on how I feel everyday. I wish I didn’t hide how feel but people don’t understand, to think about it hurts, but to talk about it your ready to die. You wish you could change or people would change the way they look and think of you but that’ll never happen. They judge you before they know you, they don’t want to take a chance toreally talk or understand you. Knowing theynever fully will, but it would be nice to see someone person try. |
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Sorrow Member
since 2006-06-14
Posts 83Ireland |
Hey that poem is really true to me also. I always feel I'm being judge before people get to know me! Glad to see i'm not alone.. |
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trUstNooNe Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 91 |
hey thanks for readin n tellin me wat u think,appreciate it,but yea too many people judge a book by its cover...*... |
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gyrl_blue Junior Member
since 2006-06-15
Posts 20Stuck In Reality |
"they don’t want to take a chance toreally talk or understand you. Knowing theynever fully will," - very true, I can relate to this piece very much at the moment, not rough at all (for me  |
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Venus1974 Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 79Tennessee, USA |
Besides a couple typos which we can all experience from time to time (guilty of that myself hehe) I think this is a great write bc it expresses first off how you feel and secondly how I too feel a lot of the time so I can truly relate...I want to thank you again for sharing bc I know how challenging that too can be...especially when we are afraid of judgement from others Great piece!! Peace and happiness to us all, Venus |
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