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yuna New Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 9 |
i share your youth, your heart and soul, dissipate my life, all eyes on you.I feel no anger, why you dont just leave and find someother clown to fool around. I try again to speak my words, you drown them out, i am too weak to shout i cant go on, you must now stop yet you dont feel, you just take all my life. you suck it out, as if some sort of poison. this must end or i will. |
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niere Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 77 |
This is really good - i really like it. It's a brilliant first post too, regardless of the stark emotion. The emotion also comes across as very solid and chaotically calm if you know what i mean lol. a brilliant write. p.s - welcome to pip! |
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