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Drained and Choked and Hurt and Broked
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Drained and Choked and Hurt and Broked |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Feeble mind the strongest type Much absorbent blood in hype Keep her chains and keep her low This ragged doll This power of mine Watch the blood like a busted pipe from her lip She loves it and I can taste it Fornicate A simple date turns into a grisly scene Fetish, just a touch Pop, hear the thud of her skull fracture against solid oak Her scream, a moan, its her turn Cold razor steel touches his chest heart gouged out Sadistic love lust carnal affair A tainted and stained room is left Bits of mankind strode about ------------------ *experimental All that is great once was small. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like this |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Very morbid, nicely done. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
*made me cringe*...very eerie and...morbid murder like. your gonna give me nightmares boy! ...of coarse, E.A. Poe did better at that, but i'll keep my mouth shut about it. =). *wink* and *high fives*. - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx everybody. I posted this in another site and the response I got was "I want the 30 seconds of my life back that it took me to read this" Glad to see you guys enjoyed it. Whats wrong with a little raw meat every now and then? GIS All that is great once was small. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
*smack the kid*...who would say such a thing? maybe they need therapy. i know of a good doctor. he usually goes by Jekel. other times he just goes by Hyde. *cackles*. - River |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
It was the forum editor. lol. I just responded like a jerk, and I think I successfully wasted another 30 seconds. hehe GIS All that is great once was small. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
For some reason I think this is one of the best I've ever read from you. Such a different perspective. It's morbid, but I couldn't stop reading it. Nice job Craig. Don't let that editor knock you down.  ~Lexy [This message has been edited by Lexy (11-15-2003 12:14 PM).] |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
intrestin write, "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
The best... Maybe I should be raw a little more often. Thanx. GIS All that is great once was small. |
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LadyMels New Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 5Texas |
Strong images this has instilled. Great stuff |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Unforgettable. GIS All that is great once was small. |
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