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"Faded Ink"
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"Faded Ink" |
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Khatharsis Junior Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 42 |
Faded Ink Everything happens with just a blink of an eye staring at a picture in the frame, lost in freezing of time But im unexplainably able to reverse and rewind My emptiness it hides, my tears flow like rivers in tides With a jarred in my hand, pick up with intent to abuse it Splattered glass around my feet, what I’m feeling, is useless The faceless whisper knew the life I’ve been through A faint voice in my head is telling me “find the strife within you” Words from my pen say I’m close to finding lies in the truth Hearing, “you’re already dead feeling the wind beneath you” Moving through the obstacles as the inc soaks it through My thoughts and pain follow the movement my soul’s been through A curving sorrow tells a story looking out a broken window Everything inside me shattered and this life’s to hard to live for Feels like sitting on the porch as life’s swinging away Just being able to get by, just living on this minimum wage Turning scripture into a masterpiece wit imagery of words Sadly, the picture paints a disturbance no one knows what its worth All I feel is the tears of the sun, even when it steadily shines I can’t hide my fears in the rain when its never heavenly divine These words, there suddenly no longer in front of me I can’t face my own reflection because the truth is too ugly But everything has a beginning, fades and u cant escape Incarcerated in time, my pen writes the message as the inc begins to fade... |
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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az |
awsome poem i like it alot great imagery "I'm floating the hoaming pigeon out hell's kitchen window |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
I enjoyed this read very much. It has alot of strong passages that just jump out at you, however I do feel that you lose a sence of structure in your poem. It seems to change just slightly in rhyme and beat every so often and there doesn't seem to be a pattern to it. But that must be how it fell out of your pen. Good one. |
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Khatharsis Junior Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 42 |
Thnaks so much for both replies! Uppin! |
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